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    • Finding The Right Word: Thesis Revisions

      Thursday, 19 Jun 2008 - 17:24 GMT

      From my thesis:

      “These complexes are temporary, and are dissolved when the leading edge of the motile cell has passed beyond the anchor-point.”

      (note from advisor): don’t use the word dissolved, it has too specific a meaning (i.e. going into solution.)

      “These complexes are temporary, and are decomposed…”
      “These complexes are temporary, and are deconstructed…”
      “These complexes are temporary, and are degraded…”
      “These complexes are temporary, and FALL THE FUCK APART…”

      Argh.

      Last updated: Thursday, 19 Jun 2008 - 17:24 GMT

      • Comments

        • Date:
          Thursday, 19 Jun 2008 - 18:01 GMT
          Bob O'Hara said:

          I feel your pain – I have the same problem sometimes. Luckily the thesaurus isn’t extinct.

          Disappear or dissipate look good candidates to me.

        • Date:
          Thursday, 19 Jun 2008 - 18:05 GMT
          Samuel Frankel said:

          Thanks Bob. It’s just funny how different words carry such a context. Like “decomposed” makes me think of a compost pile, deconstructed like a tortured literary analogy, and disappear like some kind of magical ninja creature, none of which are quite the impression I’m trying to give! Thanks for the link, too.

        • Date:
          Thursday, 19 Jun 2008 - 18:07 GMT
          Sabine Hossenfelder said:

          decay?

        • Date:
          Thursday, 19 Jun 2008 - 18:10 GMT
          Samuel Frankel said:

          Hmmm…actually I kind of like the sound of “decay”

        • Date:
          Thursday, 19 Jun 2008 - 18:16 GMT
          Henry Gee said:

          ‘Discombooberated’ works for me, though possibly not ‘fubarized’.

        • Date:
          Thursday, 19 Jun 2008 - 18:29 GMT
          Anna Kushnir said:

          Brilliant. It’s funny how much weight words carry in science writing! I agonized over every word in my dissertation. That is in no way helpful to you, however. How about “dismantled”? Or does that imply that there is something around to do the dismantling? And I would say that the complexes are transient, not temporary.

        • Date:
          Thursday, 19 Jun 2008 - 18:34 GMT
          Cath Ennis said:

          Dissociate? Disassemble?

        • Date:
          Thursday, 19 Jun 2008 - 18:38 GMT
          Samuel Frankel said:

          I suspected you might have had some similar issues in your recent thesis Anna, and its exactly like you say, science writing makes you realize the implications of words like dismantled, that something does the dismantling which is not the intent of the sentence. I’m going to take your suggestion on “transient” though, that does have more of the ring I’m looking for.

          Henry, I’m going to steal “fubarized” for a presentation on Sunday. Well played.

          I really appreciate all the comments and help, y’all, thanks!

        • Date:
          Thursday, 19 Jun 2008 - 18:40 GMT
          Bob O'Hara said:

          How about splurged? It has a nice sound to it.

        • Date:
          Thursday, 19 Jun 2008 - 21:15 GMT
          Maxine Clarke said:

          fragment?

        • Date:
          Wednesday, 25 Jun 2008 - 14:03 GMT
          Heather Etchevers said:

          I personally like Cath’s suggestion best… what did you pick, in the end?


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